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20140113-DSC_3551

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@ Hawaii, Pearl Harbor 
Image size
4493x2857px 8.43 MB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D3100
Shutter Speed
1/320 second
Aperture
F/10.0
Focal Length
56 mm
ISO Speed
400
Date Taken
Jan 13, 2014, 11:44:18 AM
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

This is a very interesting structure and I really like the lines of this building. Personally I think that with such curved lines you needed to make sure to level the horizon in this shot in post processing. I find it kind of difficult to look at it with the horizon tilted to the right side, maybe is just my perception on the shot when I mention it being difficult to watch.

Also, I find the vignette to be a little too overwhelming for this frame, maybe a little less would work better since you are directing my view to the object in the center of the picture it only makes the horizon seem a little more crooked as I mentioned before.

Other than that only thing I can think of is maybe open up the shot a little more, I would've liked to see what this memorial is in relation to it's surroundings. Good job, and there's always room to improve so keep at it.